Topic: Occupy Wall Street.
In my opinion I was a little confused by their overall goals.
I am not sure if what they were doing was any different from other groups or organizations that are against a certain issue and all they conquer is media recognition. With all do respect, at the end of the day nothing remarkable happened, they got recognition but no real outcome. However, I do admire the way they performed at the museums and how they captured the visitors attention, for the artistic part of it.
This entry is below par. It does not demonstrate any meaningful engagement with the topic. How much time did you spent writing it? That's actually a good gage of whether you're doing a good job. You may wish to edit it - do some research - the info is on the web!
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